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Wednesday, 29 August 2018

ezra's speech.

we have been learning about persuading people in our speeches. We learned 

We need to have 3 good reasons to persuade people to agree with us,

Please click on the link to see my speech.



3 comments:

  1. Hi Ezra It is Isaac from yms I like you Speech I enjoyed the part of your speech when you did the part and it said Greeting
    Good morning everyone. I like motorbike riding because it is fun.

    Racing
    Reasons:
    Firstly, riding motorbikes is so much fun because you can do backflips and they are very cool to watch. I cannot do a backflip but I want to learn and practice on my motorbike.

    Secondly, when you enter a competition you have a chance to win big trophies that are very shiny. Another cool thing about trophies is that you can also get a picture of you on it. I have won a trophy before and that was awesome because that was my first trophy ever.

    Lastly I like Racing with against other people.

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  2. Hi azra it's Hunter from Rimu
    I really like how in your speech you have sent the lines out properly and use the lines the correct spots. I think you could work on writing a little bit more.

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  3. Hi Ezra I like how you have made a very very strong word in your speech. I like how this is good from Dylan

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